Your video is very good! I love the different shots you took of the different pastries. I like that you got the two sisters talking at different times. It flows very nicely. Great job!
I think overall we did a nice job keeping it simple and concise. However, some of the sequences ended up being placed in a way that was sort of random and so I wish we would have planned how we were going to make it flow a bit better.
Great Video! The one thing I thought was weird was that the audio levels in the music was inconsistent throughout the video. For example the music would be super quiet when no one was speaking. And when the music ended and then abruptly started again was off-putting. Other than that though, well done. The shots were great, the things they said were important, and the way it was put together tells me you put a lot of thought into it.
Cool content, you had some strange things going on with your audio and the level of the music of your song. Other than the audio cutting out and quieting in seemingly random spots your film was pretty sweet.
Music choice was a great decision! It goes very well with the theme and feel
A few critiques - In the video there were times the audio clipped and I think that could have been fixed with some creative editing. I don't know the exact reason for the clipping so I can't make direct suggestions, but overall the video was very cohesive and entertaining!
Everything looks so delicious! I love the up close footage of all of the bakers making the pastries. It really gives a look into their every day duties. There were a few parts during the interview that weren't a clean edit. There was also a time where the music stopped playing for a few seconds and then began playing again.
this is a very interesting topic and with a little extra time can be a superb documentary. the music repeats itself a little too much and some edits are out of nowhere and sort of slow the pacing down. overall, this is a great subject and with some minor changes can be better
The music fit so perfectly with the content of your video. It had a very happy feel to it that, along with the movie, just sucked me in. One criticism I do have is it sounded like there were some tracks from the interviews used more than once.
Really cute story, and GREAT footage in front and back of the shop. Be aware of using similar or duplicate footage ("30days"quote). It was nice to see indoors and outdoors as well and shots of customers. It made a big difference.
I really enjoyed the subject matter of the documentary, everything was shot well and looked clean. The one thing that could've used some work would be the in and out points of the some of the shots, some of the music cuts for 10 sec then restarts and then some erroneous uhms and uhs could've maybe been chopped, and may the addition of some more of the interview over the b roll would've been nice, mainly cause I wanted to hear more about the place
I really liked the music you chose for the background, its fun and it fits well with content. I also really liked the close up shots that were taken of the bake goods. The interviews are very well done and I liked how how it switches between the interviewees. One thing I did notice is the music sound is off, there are some parts that are more quite than others and then fades, which is fine but wasn't very consistent. I also liked the different clips taken in the kitchen. Great job very well done!
Your video is very good! I love the different shots you took of the different pastries. I like that you got the two sisters talking at different times. It flows very nicely. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI think overall we did a nice job keeping it simple and concise. However, some of the sequences ended up being placed in a way that was sort of random and so I wish we would have planned how we were going to make it flow a bit better.
ReplyDeleteGreat Video! The one thing I thought was weird was that the audio levels in the music was inconsistent throughout the video. For example the music would be super quiet when no one was speaking. And when the music ended and then abruptly started again was off-putting. Other than that though, well done. The shots were great, the things they said were important, and the way it was put together tells me you put a lot of thought into it.
ReplyDeleteCool content, you had some strange things going on with your audio and the level of the music of your song. Other than the audio cutting out and quieting in seemingly random spots your film was pretty sweet.
ReplyDeleteMusic choice was a great decision! It goes very well with the theme and feel
ReplyDeleteA few critiques -
In the video there were times the audio clipped and I think that could have been fixed with some creative editing. I don't know the exact reason for the clipping so I can't make direct suggestions, but overall the video was very cohesive and entertaining!
Everything looks so delicious! I love the up close footage of all of the bakers making the pastries. It really gives a look into their every day duties. There were a few parts during the interview that weren't a clean edit. There was also a time where the music stopped playing for a few seconds and then began playing again.
ReplyDeletethis is a very interesting topic and with a little extra time can be a superb documentary. the music repeats itself a little too much and some edits are out of nowhere and sort of slow the pacing down. overall, this is a great subject and with some minor changes can be better
ReplyDeleteThe music fit so perfectly with the content of your video. It had a very happy feel to it that, along with the movie, just sucked me in. One criticism I do have is it sounded like there were some tracks from the interviews used more than once.
ReplyDeleteReally cute story, and GREAT footage in front and back of the shop. Be aware of using similar or duplicate footage ("30days"quote). It was nice to see indoors and outdoors as well and shots of customers. It made a big difference.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the subject matter of the documentary, everything was shot well and looked clean. The one thing that could've used some work would be the in and out points of the some of the shots, some of the music cuts for 10 sec then restarts and then some erroneous uhms and uhs could've maybe been chopped, and may the addition of some more of the interview over the b roll would've been nice, mainly cause I wanted to hear more about the place
ReplyDeleteThe music fits the video well. The interview was conducted very well and the kid at the end was a good conclusion to the video
ReplyDeleteI really liked the music you chose for the background, its fun and it fits well with content. I also really liked the close up shots that were taken of the bake goods. The interviews are very well done and I liked how how it switches between the interviewees. One thing I did notice is the music sound is off, there are some parts that are more quite than others and then fades, which is fine but wasn't very consistent. I also liked the different clips taken in the kitchen. Great job very well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat video with only a few minor issues. I though the music choice for fit the tone for the video.
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